Score: 8

"Short, simple and beautiful"

submission: Four Walls....

date: June 11, 2006

Great work. Nice and simple, well paced and timed.
A pleasant demonstration of the benefits of good idea.

Score: 7

"Not enough..."

submission: This Is Serious Mum! pt.1

date: September 29, 2005

As a fellow Australian, and follower of TISM, this was just a tease. A nice begining to something that really deserves to be longer. You've drawn from a much larger body of work, and this just doesn't go long enough to do it true justice. Please finish what you have started - it will be highly anticipated in certain circles.
You know, it's not often a flash animation doens't go long enough... get the point?

Score: 4

"Shame to see such skills go to waste"

submission: Duprix Preview

date: March 26, 2005

Looks like you could do a lot better if you wanted to. Nice animation and all, but you could have dome something with it. As far as a trailer to something better is concerned, this is trully uninspiring. Any more of this animation, even as nicely done as it is, would be utterly boring. Good animation will only get you so far, try writing some script/action/plot to put behind your skills.

Score: 6

"Great first time effort"

submission: love is beautiful

date: March 24, 2005

Your first ever flash animation?
Looks promising - good content & concept, reasonable execution.
Just goes to show that a simple flash can be a good flash if it has the right elements. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Score: 2

"Pretty boring stuff, really"

submission: Egg Bounce

date: March 24, 2005

You obviously have potential, but you need to work on the gameplay a lot more. Actually, you need to work on everything a lot more. Keep trying, but don't waste people's time with stuff this awkward to play and boring.

Score: 6

"Keep the tutorials comin', we need more help."

submission: All-In-One Tutorial 2

date: March 24, 2005

Simple, quick and full of good content. The music button was a nice touch, I dunno why people would want to listen to mangled, compressed music while trying to learn some'n.
It could have had more usefull information - hell, I was kinda hoping for twice as much scripting advice.
The content was good, but the quantity was lacking. Let's see a veritable encylopedia of tutorials, and soon, please!